Here is a formal draft for the introductory email to Carlton Clyburn, the Community & Economic Development Director for Highland Park. This letter is structured to sound professional, visionary, and respectful of the city’s current infrastructure efforts.
Subject: Preliminary Proposal: Sustainable Aquaculture & Historic Site Revitalization – [Your Corporation Name]
Dear Director Clyburn,
I am writing to you today on behalf of [Your Corporation Name] to formally express our interest in developing a state-of-the-art Sustainable Aquaculture Center within the historic Ford Plant district.
As Highland Park continues its “Return to Excellence” through the 2026 water infrastructure renewals, we believe our project offers a unique opportunity to marry the city’s industrial legacy with the future of green technology. Our goal is to establish a high-tech, closed-loop fish farming facility that provides local jobs and healthy, Detroit-branded food products.
Specifically, we are looking to discuss:
- Site Suitability: Utilizing the existing industrial footprint near the Manchester/Woodward area for a clean manufacturing (Ag-Tech) use.
- Infrastructure Alignment: Coordinating our high-volume (but highly efficient) water needs with the city’s current Phase 2 water main replacements.
- Economic Incentives: Exploring the feasibility of P.A. 198 tax abatements and Brownfield credits for this specialized use.
- Community Investment: Our intent to utilize a 70/30 crowdfunding model (via the MILE Act) to allow Highland Park and Michigan residents to participate as direct shareholders in this project.
We would like to request a Conceptual Review Meeting with you and your team (and potentially a representative from the Planning and Water departments) to present our initial site plan and receive your feedback on the project’s alignment with the city’s Master Plan.
I have attached a brief Executive Summary of our business plan for your review. We are available for a meeting at your earliest convenience, either in person at the Robert Blackwell Municipal Building or via Zoom.
Thank you for your time and for your leadership in the revitalization of Highland Park.
Sincerely,
[Your Name]
Managing Director, [Your Corporation Name]
[Your Phone Number]
[Your Website/LinkedIn]
Strategic Tips for Your Email
- The “Water” Hook: By mentioning that you are coordinating with the current water main replacements, you show that you aren’t trying to use the broken 1915 pipes, but are instead a “ready-to-go” customer for their brand-new 2026 system.
- The Attachment: When you send this, make sure to attach the Aquaculture Business Plan Summary we drafted in the previous step.
- The “MILE Act” Mention: Mentioning local crowdfunding is a major political win for city directors; it shows the project isn’t just “outside money” but is “community-owned.”
Would you like me to also draft a shorter, more technical “Inquiry Email” for Damon Garrett at the Water Department to ask about the specific water pressure (Fire Flow) at the Ford site?